A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighborhood. In your letter: - Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase - Give the reasons behind your decision to leave - Suggest possible alternative areas that you know

Dear John, I hope you're doing great, I'm writing
this
email to let you know about a serious thing that you have to think about before buying a new home, which is the increasing number of crimes in my
neighborhood
Change the spelling
neighbourhood
show examples
. I've heard that you're planning to buy a house
that is
located
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
6th
street
Capitalize word
Street
show examples
which is very close to me. But I wanna warn you that
this
area is not
good
Rephrase
as good
show examples
as you think, and recently the police
has
Change the verb form
have
show examples
reported a huge number of
killing
Verb problem
apply
show examples
murders in that place. Most of
people
Add an article
the people
show examples
who
is
Change the verb form
are
show examples
living there
felt
Wrong verb form
feel
show examples
very scared and have decided to move from
this
area.
Therefore
, I
tends
Change the verb form
tend
show examples
to feel unsafe and I'm planning to move out
from
Change preposition
of
show examples
this
neighborhood
Change the spelling
neighbourhood
show examples
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
and to look for calm and
scure
Correct your spelling
secure
areas in the city. I
suggests
Change the verb form
suggest
show examples
that you come to live with me in the city centre. I think that you will like the vibes and the huge houses out there. If you need any
further
help please contact me by email. See you soon, Best wishes, Nouf,
Submitted by noufxmut on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion
Consider organizing your paragraphs more clearly. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to improve clarity and coherence.
task achievement
Try to maintain a more consistent and formal tone throughout the letter. While friendly, some informal expressions might not be suitable for this type of advice letter.
task achievement
Your letter provides a complete response to the prompt, addressing all the required points: recommending not to buy, explaining your reasons for leaving, and suggesting an alternative area.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are well done, adding a touch of personal connection to your letter.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: