The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart shows information on the percentage of females going into higher education in five different countries in a certain period between 1970 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be pointed out from the chart that, the Linking Words
UK
and Use synonyms
Canada
were the highest Use synonyms
while
Japan was the lowest between 1970 and 2005. Dramatically, the Linking Words
UK
had a bigger increase than others in a special time.
Use synonyms
According to
the chart , the USA started at 35 and it jumped by 60. Linking Words
In contrast
, Linking Words
Canada
was unpopular throughout which stayed stable. Use synonyms
Also
, Japan went up from 18 to 38 between 1970 and 2005 so it was the same as the USA in 1970.
Linking Words
In addition
, The Linking Words
UK
began at 32 and it increased by 60 between 1970 and 2005. At Use synonyms
last
, the Linking Words
UK
and Use synonyms
Canada
were the same amount which was 60. In 2005, Japan was still the lowest Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
UK
and Use synonyms
Canada
were the highest.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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