The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart shows information on the percentage of females going into higher education in five different countries in a certain period between 1970 and 2005.

Overall

, it can be pointed out from the chart that, the

and

Canada

were the highest

while

Japan was the lowest between 1970 and 2005. Dramatically, the

had a bigger increase than others in a special time.

According to

the chart , the USA started at 35 and it jumped by 60.

In contrast

Canada

was unpopular throughout which stayed stable.

Also

, Japan went up from 18 to 38 between 1970 and 2005 so it was the same as the USA in 1970.

In addition

, The

began at 32 and it increased by 60 between 1970 and 2005. At

last

, the

and

Canada

were the same amount which was 60. In 2005, Japan was still the lowest

while

the

and

Canada

were the highest.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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