You live in a small university town. Last week, you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price. You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly. However, this week, the laptop doesn’t even switch on. Write to the store. In your letter: • Tell the store where you live & what happened • Explain the problem with the laptop • State what action you would like the store to take
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with
laptop
which I bought for my job.
I live in a small university town nowadays, I moved out big city because of my job. I went to Add an article
a laptop
the laptop
shopping
mall and I Correct article usage
the shopping
purchase
a new Wrong verb form
purchased
laptop
at an inexpensive price. Then
I used laptop
for writing a long assignment. Correct article usage
a laptop
This
week it does not switch on.
The first problem is the laptop
does not switch on. Because,
it had the problem with Remove the comma
apply
laptop
, I purchased from your company. Add an article
the laptop
a laptop
Furthermore
, it was does
not charge becauseChange the verb form
did
,
the charger does not work.
So I bought Remove the comma
apply
the
new charger for Correct article usage
a
laptop
. Correct article usage
the laptop
However
, it was never work.
I would be grateful if you could change
give me a full refund or I suggest that you replace the item. If you do not take action nobody will attend to your agency.
I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem.
Yours faithfully,
Xamidov IymonjonVerb problem
apply
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coherence cohesion
You should aim to provide a clearer logical structure in your writing. Ensure that every paragraph has a single main idea and link your points logically.
task achievement
Be explicit about the actions you want the store to take. Perhaps mention that you have the receipt and are willing to return the laptop for inspection.
task achievement
You have clearly outlined the problem with the laptop and your expectations for a resolution.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is polite and formal, which is appropriate for this type of correspondence.
coherence cohesion
Your closing and greeting are well-structured and appropriate for a formal letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.