The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart gives information about the distribution of females going into higher education in five different countries in the years 1970 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the highest percentage of women who went to higher school was made by all countries
at the end
of the period,
while
at the beginning of the period showed the lowest proportion.
In addition
, the figure in Canada was the equal rate in two years. In 1970, the women students in the UK and the USA stood at 35% and precisely 40%,
consecutively
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respectively
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.
Then
there was a significant increase of almost 25% in 2005. Interestingly, female pupil participants in Canada remained unchanged at exactly 60% in both years.
Similarly
, the upward trend in Females who continued to higher education was allocated to Japan and Germany which comprised 20% and 50%, respectively in 1970. Whilst there was doubled in Japan in 2005, there was slight growth to 55% in 2005
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rate
  • percentage
  • decade
  • increase/decrease
  • compare/contrast
  • significant
  • socio-economic factors
  • progressive
  • minimal changes
  • hypothesize
  • global developments
  • regional developments
  • influence
  • trend analysis
  • workforce participation
  • historical context
  • labor market
  • gender gap
  • employment policies
  • cultural norms
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