Write a letter to the manager of a prestigious, successful company, inviting them to consider your resume and thus your employment.

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Dear
sir
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Sir
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/Madam I am writing
this
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letter to bring your attention to my CV which I
have
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apply
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sent you
couple
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a couple
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of days ago. I am a graphic designer and I am keen to have the required position in your great company. I would appreciate
if
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it if
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you observe every
details
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detail
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of my portfolio; significant items are mentioned there.
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, my academic background, degrees and university are pointed out; the applications and skills
which
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in which
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I am
expert
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an expert
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in
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apply
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are indicated; some of my
designs
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design
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samples are represented with demanded details;
also
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, the companies which I worked with
them
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are mentioned too. Indeed, I hardly try to be creative in my career and consider
clients
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clients'
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requests for their projects; in
this
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way, the final designs bear worthy qualifications.
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, I am a good team player so I try to regard diverse attitudes and points of
views
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, and I adapt myself to various circumstances as soon as possible. Actually, I am an organized person and I think
aspect
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this aspect
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of me is beneficial for working with successful companies like yours. I keenly regard your response. Respectfully, Miss Ghazaleh Shadman
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coherence cohesion
To improve the logical structure, make sure to introduce the purpose of your letter in the opening paragraph, and then clearly divide your information into relevant sections.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph deals with a single idea. For instance, combine all aspects of your qualifications, like academic background and work experience, in one paragraph.
task achievement
To achieve an even more complete response, convey how your skills specifically align with the needs and projects of the company.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are respectful and appropriate for a formal letter.
task achievement
The letter responds well to the task by speaking about your qualifications and experiences.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable for a professional appeal.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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