Many parents are unhappy with the amount of violence in video games, television programmes, and other leisure activities for children. How harmful, in your opinion, could this be to children? What could be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

There is no denying the fact that the increasing level of violence in video games, television, and other entertainment for

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free time

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making parents

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how

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children and potential solutions to tackle

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issue. The modern era has provided a variety of entertainment methods for

kids

. It has been a struggle for parents to manage the violence that

happen

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due to

the higher usage of electronic mood by children for fun.

To begin

with, children who spend more time in front of the television or video games, lack

self-confident

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, and communication with people.

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,

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could cause disorders and mental health issues for

kids

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especially toddlers under eight. To exemplify, they will have

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issues

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that will lead them to have poor vision at a young age and

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they will have weak social communication with the environment that they are surrounded by. To tackle

this

issue, it is vital that the parents should change their parenting style and get closer to their child for guidance.

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, they could share some quality time together and

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could play board

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because that will increase the

child

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thinking and productivity.

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it is clear that

a cooperative effort of elders and the government would come up with solutions. In conclusion, society is worried about the young

generation

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future life, causing long-term problems in their lives.

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, with suitable management towards the quest, there is a hope that

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issue will be tackled, and the

kids

will use the electronics less with the resolutions laid in the hands of grownups.