The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the rate of exports in five different categories including
petroleum
, engineered goods, valuable stones, agricultural products
, and textiles
in 2015 and 2016. It can be seen that the highest percentage belongs to petroleum
products
while
the least one is textiles
and agricultural products
.
Initially
, in 2015, the most popular export products
were petroleum
products
with $60 billion
, it
followed by engineering goods with just under $60 Correct pronoun usage
apply
billion
. While
gems and jewelry
had just over $40 Change the spelling
jewellery
billion
in 2015 among export products
, agricultural products
, and textiles
had $30 billion
and just under $30 billion
, respectively.
When it comes in 2016, there was a slight increase in petroleum
from $60 to approximately $65 billion
. Next,
engineering goods illustrated a similar rise by reaching to
over $60 Change preposition
apply
billion
. On the other hand
, valuable stones had unique changes when compared to others, there was a decrease of around $2 billion
in 2016. Furthermore
, agricultural products
and textiles
increased their pies in export trade in 2016, by climbing over $30 billion
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Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum, products, textiles, billion with synonyms.
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