The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feartures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates the stages in the
process
of electricity
generation using geothermal energy.
Overall
, it is noticeable that it requires five steps in order to produce electricity
, additionally
beginning with collecting cold water
and ending with producing electricity
.
The process
begins with collecting cold water
in a tank, after which it is piped 4.5 kilometres underground. The second step involves pumped-down cold water
is
transmitted from the injection well to the production well through the geothermal zone: where a number of hot rocks are rowed. At the third stage in the Unnecessary verb
apply
process
of electricity
, accordingly
, hot water
is pumped up by a pipe toward the condenser.
Moreover
, the next step begins with steaming gained hot water
into the turbine, and after it is powered by steam. At the last
stage in the process
, we can see that powered water
from the turbine goes through the generator which produces the electricity
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