The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feartures, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feartures, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feartures, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram demonstrates the stages in the
process
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of
electricity
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generation using geothermal energy.
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, it is noticeable that it requires five steps in order to produce
electricity
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,
additionally
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beginning with collecting cold
water
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and ending with producing
electricity
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. The
process
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begins with collecting cold
water
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in a tank, after which it is piped 4.5 kilometres underground. The second step involves pumped-down cold
water
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transmitted from the injection well to the production well through the geothermal zone: where a number of hot rocks are rowed. At the third stage in the
process
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of
electricity
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,
accordingly
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, hot
water
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is pumped up by a pipe toward the condenser.
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, the next step begins with steaming gained hot
water
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into the turbine, and after it is powered by steam. At the
last
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stage in the
process
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, we can see that powered
water
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from the turbine goes through the generator which produces the
electricity
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.

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