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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays the profit exports of a certain country from 2015 to 2016.
Overall
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, All of the
products
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 made a contribution to its country, some of the exports increased and slightly decreased. In 2015, Petroleum
products
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, Engineered goods, and gems and jewellery started at the high. The money that has been used for these
products
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 as it follows 60
billion
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, around 55
billion
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 and approximately 42
billion
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.
However
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 the agricultural
products
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 and textiles started at a low but they increased slightly during 2016, around 32
billion
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 and 33
billion
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 significantly.
Furthermore
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, in 2016 Petroleum slightly increased to around 62
billion
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 and engineered goods to almost 61
billion
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while
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 Gems and Jewellery slightly decreased to 40
billion
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.
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