The table shows the proportion of people in England who agree with same-sex marriage from 1989 to 2013.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
people
who agree with same-sex marriage in England
between 1989 and 2013.
It is clear that
in 1989 atheists were more tolerant while
only a few religious people
in total agreed with this
type of marriage.In 2013, the situation changed dramatically,more people
in England
became more tolerant no matter if they believed in god or not.
However
, atheists stayed at the top in every year since 1989 increasing from 20 per cent
to 77 per cent
in 2013. Also
,there is a huge improvement among Roman Catholics ,they gained 52 per cent
since then
and now stay in the 2 place
just after no religious Change to a plural noun
places
people
.Almost same
changes showed Church of Correct article usage
the same
England
people
and from
Other Christian Change preposition
apply
people
,improving from 9 per cent
to 55 percentages
for Replace the word
per cent
Church
of Correct article usage
the Church
England
and 54 for Other Christians.
It is obvious that non-Christians showed the least changes ,they were at the bottom of the top every year from 1989 until 2013 which describes them as not tolerant of same-sex marriage.Submitted by talgattan4ez on
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