The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph displays the
percentage
of women
managers in Eldan Ltd
, Bamforth Ltd
and Finsbury Ltd
from 1975 to 2015.
Overall
, the participation of females in senior management tended to go up year
after year
in the 3 companies finished
the period Eldan Correct pronoun usage
that finished
Ltd
with the highest percentage
, Bamford Ltd
with second place and Finsbury Ltd
with the lowest proportion.
Eldan Ltd
in 1975 and 1980 had the lowest participation of women
in management, however
from 1980 to 2015 the proportion abruptly increased throughout the years being
in 2015 the company with the highest proportion of Unnecessary verb
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women
participating in senior management with 64% of workers.
Finsbury Ltd
,
started in 1975 with the highest Remove the comma
apply
percentage
of women
with
16%, but throughout the years the Change preposition
at
percentage
of senior managers slightly decreased being
1990 and 2015 the years with most Unnecessary verb
apply
women
working with
20% and 26% respectively. Bamford Change preposition
at
Ltd
started with 9% in 1975, but, year
after year
the participation of women
slightly increased reaching the
second place with 46% of Correct article usage
apply
women
managers in 2015.Submitted by daniruspi on
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