The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. https://brpaper.com/ielts/wp-content/uploads/2020/09/students.jpg

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

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The pie charts below illustrate the percentage of British
students
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who are capable of speaking other languages
besides
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English in two different years.
Overall
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, a large portion of fellows could speak Spanish,
whereas
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, German-speaking
students
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were the miner portion without any considerable changes since
then
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. There is a slight increase in the Spanish language and no additional changes in German through these 10 years,
while
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the share of learners who didn’t speak other languages diminished. The chart shows the number of people in university who speak Spanish accounted for 30% in 2000 and
then
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it had 5% growth since 2000,
however
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, the proportion of German speaker
students
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contributed 10% in 2000 and it remained constant in 2010.
According to
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the charts, the percentage of
students
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with an inability to speak other languages was 20% in 2000 and eventually, it had significantly decrease in 2010 which formed 10% of total
students
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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