.The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.

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the survey results on children's activities, including two

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,

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cultural and leisure activities, with

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in the second paragraph

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used to play computer games, followed by basketball,

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, girls were likely to

dancing

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and

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.

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popular in

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activities at 34%,

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reading was the lowest at 2%.

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, the proportion of boys that play basketball and soccer

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their free time

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26% and 17%, respectively.

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, listening to music and skateboarding were similar

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males

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at roughly 10%.

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are more

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dancing and reading at around 25%, and the percentage of girls who spend their leisure time on computer games and netball

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quite the same at 15%.

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as boys at 10% that near to gymnastics.