The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table demonstrates the ratio of categorized destitute citizens of Australia in
year
1999.
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the year
Overall
, whereas
the largest number of economically deprived people were couples with children, the least number of individuals who suffer
from economic problems were elderly couples.
In 1999, almost 2 million Wrong verb form
suffered
of
Australian Change preposition
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residences
by just above 10% and more than 1 Replace the word
residents
in
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tenth
of Add an article
a tenth
the tenth
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the family
a family
family
with kids, which is equal to 933.000 people had poverty Fix the agreement mistake
families
issue
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issues
This
is the most crowded figure and it was followed by childless singles by nearly 360.000 citizens. When it comes to the biggest proportions, divorced parents were leading by just over 20 percent
, and singles who had no children were in second place by almost %20 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
.
The individuals who Change the spelling
per cent
less
faced Correct quantifier usage
apply
this
problem relatively were aged Australians. Among elderly citizens, 4 percent
of couples by just under 50.000 individuals and 6 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
of singles by well over 50.000 Australians had insufficient income.Change the spelling
per cent
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