The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
The given table demonstrates the ratio of categorized destitute citizens of Australia in
year
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1999.
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,
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the largest number of economically deprived people were couples with children, the least number of individuals who
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from economic problems were elderly couples. In 1999, almost 2 million
of
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Australian
residences
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by just above 10% and more than 1
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tenth
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of
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the family
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family
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with kids, which is equal to 933.000 people had poverty
issue
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.
This
is the most crowded figure and it was followed by childless singles by nearly 360.000 citizens. When it comes to the biggest proportions, divorced parents were leading by just over 20
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, and singles who had no children were in second place by almost %20
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. The individuals who
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faced
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problem relatively were aged Australians. Among elderly citizens, 4
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of couples by just under 50.000 individuals and 6
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of singles by well over 50.000 Australians had insufficient income.
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