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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The provided bar chart depicts the data about electricity
production
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 and
consumption
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 in the top
ten
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10
 countries in 2014.
Overall
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, China led in both
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 and
consumption
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, followed by the United States and Russia. Notably, Germany was the only country where electricity
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 exceeded
production
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. In terms of electricity
production
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, China topped the list with 5,398
billion
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kWh
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, followed by the United States at 4,099
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kWh
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. Russia, Japan, and India had considerably lower
production
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 levels at 1,057, 936.2, and 871
billion
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kWh
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, respectively. Regarding
consumption
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, China and the United States maintained their leading positions with 5,322 and 3,866
billion
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kWh
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, respectively.
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 is slightly less than their
production
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 figures.
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, Germany's
consumption
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 was 582.5
billion
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kWh
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, surpassing its
production
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 of 526.6
billion
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kWh
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, consumption, billion, kwh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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