The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts
illustrates
the jobs Change the verb form
illustrate
of
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apply
graduates
did after finished
their study in Anthropology Wrong verb form
finishing
in
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at
the
certain university Correct article usage
a
also
the salaries of three types of employment Correct word choice
and also
in
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for
that
all of the Anthropology Correct pronoun usage
apply
graduates
. It can be seen that more than a
half of Correct article usage
apply
anthropologist
are in Fix the agreement mistake
anthropologists
a
full-time Remove the article
apply
work
after give years, and the
they could Remove the article
apply
got
paid more in private companies than being Change the verb form
get
be got
a freelance consultants
or employed by Correct the article-noun agreement
a freelance consultant
freelance consultants
government
.
Most of the Add an article
the government
graduates
from one university worked full-timely
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full-time
of
52%. Following the full-time Change preposition
apply
worker
is the part-time worker
being 15%. Surpringly
, the Correct your spelling
Surprisingly
propotion
of Correct your spelling
proportion
umemployment
is 12% Correct your spelling
unemployment
at
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in
the
third place just after those Correct article usage
apply
fll-time
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full-time
worker
and part-time Fix the agreement mistake
workers
worker
. There are 5% of them keep studying and Fix the agreement mistake
workers
work
at the same time, and there are 8% of them not Wrong verb form
working
doing
the Wrong verb form
do
work
while
they pursuing
another degree. Unfortunately, we gotWrong verb form
pursue
8
% loss of Correct article usage
an 8
tracktion
.
As for the salary, Correct your spelling
traction
it is clear that
private companies pay their employees more than freelance consultants got
and the government Wrong verb form
get
in
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apply
the
percentage of 5% in the top salary range and 20% more in the Correct article usage
a
sencond
level. We can tell that Correct your spelling
second
graduates
got
paid about 100,000 if they Wrong verb form
get
work
as freelance consultants and government sector at the propotion
of 40% and 50%.
In conclusion, most graduate students Correct your spelling
proportion
got
a Wrong verb form
get
work
after five years, and the salaries they got
paid might be Wrong verb form
get
more
if they Correct word choice
higher
work
in a private company.Submitted by 10youting01 on
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