The supplied line chart compares the proportion of female employees in 4 nations, namely the US, France, Afghanistan and Korea, in 2 decades starting from 1985.

The supplied line chart compares the proportion of female employees in 4 nations, namely the US, France, Afghanistan and Korea, in 2 decades starting from 1985.
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The line graph given provides information about how the number of female workers in 4 countries, the
USA
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, France, Afghanistan, and
Korea
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, varied across 2 decades, starting in 1985.
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, if we take the four countries in combination, it is evident that the
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and
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experience quite similar tendencies.
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, Afghanistan underwent a severe decrease in female labourers, with almost none in 2005. The
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and
Korea
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have generally identical trends from 1985 to 2000, with women employed increasing steadily;
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,
while
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the
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has a reduction from close to 70% to approximately 60%,
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rose slightly from about 35% to roughly 40% in 2005. As far as France is concerned,
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it underwent a significant downfall in 1990, causing its female employees to be at 30%, the percentage of female French workers still managed to rise, reaching its peak in 2000 at merely 60%. In terms of Afghanistan, its numbers started at more than 30% at the start and rose to nearly 40% in 1995;
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, the numbers experienced an extreme decrease, with almost no women working in 2005.
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