The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy in the UK between 2000 and 2010.
The line chart compares the changes in employment
rates
in the different sectors of the British economy in the space of a decade ( from 2000 to 2010).
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Overall
, self-employed and public sectors of the economy regarding employment Linking Words
rates
saw a slight growth Use synonyms
period
as a whole Use synonyms
while
the private sector declined sustainably during the Linking Words
period
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The Use synonyms
rates
of private employment consisted of the highest point around 50 at the beginning of the Use synonyms
period
. Following that despite being the highest, there was a significant decline Use synonyms
firstly
to 30 in 2006 and Linking Words
secondly
to 20 Linking Words
at the end
of the duration.
The other two sectors, namely the public sector and self-employed were roughly 40 and 20 respectively at the initial time. The Linking Words
rates
of self-employed remained unchanged until 2005 and Use synonyms
then
took over from private work in 2009, Linking Words
thereafter
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this
figure reached 30. Linking Words
Besides
that,the Linking Words
rates
of the services in public experienced a considerable rise just under 50 in the middle of the Use synonyms
period
and just above 50 in 2010.Use synonyms
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