The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustrations depict the transformation of a
silkworm
from an egg to a moth and the process of
silk
cloth
production. It is evident that the
silkworm
's development consists of four key phases, starting from eggs and culminating in adult moths. Meanwhile, the production of
silk
cloth
involves six distinct steps, beginning with the
silkworm
cocoons
and ending with the creation of
silk
fabric. In the first phase of the
silkworm
’s development, moths lay their eggs on mulberry leaves. After approximately ten days, the eggs hatch into
silkworm
larvae, which feed on the leaves. Over the following four to six weeks, the larvae spin
silk
threads
around themselves, eventually forming a full cocoon in three to eight days. Sixteen days later, the larvae emerge from their
cocoons
as adult moths, ready
to begin
the cycle anew.
On the other hand
, the process of
silk
cloth
production begins with the careful selection and boiling of
cocoons
in water. After boiling, the
cocoons
are unwound to extract the
silk
threads
, which can range from 300 to 900 meters in length.
Subsequently
, multiple
threads
are twisted together. In the final stages, the
threads
are either dyed first and
then
woven into the fabric, or they are woven into
cloth
and dyed
afterward
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afterwards
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words silkworm, silk, cloth, cocoons, threads with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Silkworm (Bombyx mori)
  • Sericulture
  • Egg
  • Larva/larvae
  • Cocoon
  • Moth
  • Mulberry leaves
  • Pupa/pupae
  • Spinning
  • Weaving
  • Dyeing
  • Silk threads
  • Silk cloth
  • Life cycle
  • Metamorphosis
  • Harvesting
  • Domestication
  • Natural fibers
  • Textile industry
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