The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart depicts export assets from different
goods
in one nation during 2015 and 2016. The table illustrates information about the export value’s percentage comparison from 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, the first picture shows 5 products, and it is apparent that earnings from all products rose, except one which is gems and jewellery. The second graph gives results
that every category increased, but the percentage of gems and jewels decreased.
As is presented in the illustration earnings from petroleum lines Verb problem
shows
was
the highest Correct subject-verb agreement
were
one
in both years with just over 7 Correct pronoun usage
apply
billion
dollars in 2015 and approximately 7.4 in 2016. Also
most of Add a comma
Also,
billions
came from engineered Add an article
the billions
goods
nearly 6 billion
in the first year, and after about 7.2 billion
. Meanwhile, when country
earned around 5.5 Correct article usage
the country
billion
in 2015, to 2016 it declined approximately by 2 billion
. In the fourth proportion
it has been Add a comma
proportion,
uplift
in agricultural things earnings (from 4.1 to 4.2 Correct article usage
an uplift
billion
). In the last
section billions from textiles surged approximately
six Change preposition
by approximately
billion
.
The second pictorial shows that textiles changed to 15.24%. Also
, engineered goods
increased to 8.5%. When petroleum goods
result rose to 3%, agricultural goods
rose to 0.81%. Meanwhile, gems
percentage reduced to 5.18%.Correct article usage
the gems
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