The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 2

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 2
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multiple chart illustrates the value of one country’s export earnings in various categories during 2015 and 2016.
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, there are five different types of products and their values.
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, the percentage of rates in engineered goods,petroleum products,
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,agriculture and textiles classifications.
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petroleum and engineering
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increased, other sorts of products decreased over the period shown. To be accurate, petrol and engine usage were higher in 2016 than one year ago. But, other ones increased but not too much.
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: agriculture was almost in the same range
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gems too.
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, textile has a much more important level between them
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15.24%.
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, the fact that engineering and textiles both improved their grade to be higher in 2016 than in 2015. All in all, we can see that
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improved their quality and success in 2016, but not in 2015.
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nation managed to gain more than 25% in
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year and gems and jewels had a lower rank
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other ones.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: The word "improved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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