The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 2
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multiple chart illustrates the value of one country’s export earnings in various categories during 2015 and 2016.
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Overall
, there are five different types of products and their values. Linking Words
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, the percentage of rates in engineered goods,petroleum products,Linking Words
jewelry
,agriculture and textiles classifications. Change the spelling
jewellery
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petroleum and engineering Linking Words
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increased, other sorts of products decreased over the period shown.
To be accurate, petrol and engine usage were higher in 2016 than one year ago. But, other ones increased but not too much. Unnecessary verb
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: agriculture was almost in the same range Linking Words
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gems too. Correct word choice
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, textile has a much more important level between them Linking Words
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15.24%. Change preposition
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Nevertheless
, the fact that engineering and textiles both improved their grade to be higher in 2016 than in 2015.
All in all, we can see that Linking Words
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overall
improved their quality and success in 2016, but not in 2015.Linking Words
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nation managed to gain more than 25% in Linking Words
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year and gems and jewels had a lower rank Linking Words
between
other ones.Change preposition
than
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: The word "improved" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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