The pie chart shows the percentage of carbon dioxide (CO2) emitted by the 6 biggest polluters in 2015 while the bar graph shows the top 6 emitters per capita in the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie
chart
depicts the percentage of carbon dioxide CO2 emitted by the 6 biggest polluters in 2015 while
the bar chart
shows the top 6 emitters per capita in the same year. It is clear from the pie chart
that the proportion of the rest of the world is higher significantly however
, China is also
high and is nearly the same as the rest of the world, on the other hand
, the bar chart
of CO2 per person in Saudi Arabia rocketed to its peak. In
addition
there is a significant dip in Germany, India, Russia and Japan in the period time of 2015 . Add a comma
addition,
To sum up
, we could say there is a noticeable difference between the two charts.Submitted by shougy.a on
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