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The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2915. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compar

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2915. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compar
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The bar graph illustrates the data about
proportion
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the proportion
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 of
female
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females
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 going into higher education in the UK, the USA, Australia, South Korea, and France in the years 1980 and 2015.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that every nation had
the
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 increase in percentage.
Moreover
, Australia had the biggest
per cent
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percentage
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,
while
 South Korea had the smallest fraction for both
year
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years
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. In 1980, Australia was in the first place with just under 60% and
this
 number stayed the same in the
year
 2015.
Additionally
,
United
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the United
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 States with approximately 40% in
year
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the year
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 1980 and had
rose
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 and reached
his
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its
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 peak point exactly like
Austalia
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Australia
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 in the years 1980 and 2015. For the UK, the
percantage
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percentage
 in the
year
 1980 was about 35%
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being
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the second lowest per cent for all
country
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countries
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 in that
year
, but in the
year
 2015,
this
 number
is
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increased
for
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 20% and joined to top 3
country
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countries
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 that had the biggest proportion. South Korea with 15% in
the
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1980, had
grew
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 up to exactly twice in number in 2015,
whatever
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which
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 was the smallest in
this
 graph for both years.
Finally
, France with a half in per cent in 1980, uplifted to roughly 55% in the
year
 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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