Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Does this development have more advantages or disadvatages?

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globalised, individuals are now more willing and able to find employment far away from their birthplace.

Although

this

trend has certain drawbacks, I believe that the advantages are far more significant. On the one hand, the mobility of labour for work is obviously clear. One of them is

separation

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the separation

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of families and friends. People who work far away cannot visit their families often and they do not see their childhood friends as well.

As a result

, they tend to feel empty and lonelier which may impact

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their performance at the office.

Furthermore

, if workers do not return back home, local companies may struggle to find employees to grow their businesses.

For instance

, most of South Asia Countries have a large scale of the adult population who works abroad.

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situation could lead to

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lack of local employees that

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the progression of local businesses. Today, for many people, looking for a job beyond

hometown

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has some positive measures. First of all, they provide higher salaries and better employment opportunities. In most big cities,

for example

, there are many job vacancies in different industries and

thus

, many companies facilitate career advancement in various

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.

Moreover

, people can

also

send their money to their families

as well as

accumulate savings and

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new skills, establishing businesses in their hometown which can contribute to

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economic growth. In conclusion,

it is clear that

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employment within national borders or abroad may happen

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some specific reasons.

Although

there are some possible downsides of working away, I believe that the potential benefits

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its disadvantages.