The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.
The chart reveals the
percentage
of people consuming sufficient
amount of Correct article usage
a sufficient
vegetables
and fruits
daily between 2001 and 2008.
"Women" was the group with the highest percentage
of people eating five protions
of Correct your spelling
portions
fruits
and vegetables
, with the percentage
rising from 20% to 35% from 2001 to 2006, followed by a gradual descent to 30% in 2008.
Fewest percentages of children obtained a healthy diet among the other groups over the 8 year
period, with only around 12% of the group Add a hyphen
8-year
ate
sufficient Wrong verb form
eating
fruits
and vegetables
regularly between 2001 and 2003, alomst
half the Correct your spelling
almost
percentage
of the group "women". After 2003, the percentage
for
Children's increased and terminated at around 23%.
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Overall
, the porportion
of men having a diet of five Correct your spelling
proportion
fruits
and vegetables
daily demonstrated a gentle growth, from around 17% in 2001 to 25% in 2008, after reaching one-five in 2004.Submitted by 788seal on
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