The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.

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percentage

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of people consuming

sufficient

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amount of

vegetables

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and

fruits

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daily between 2001 and 2008. "Women" was the group with the highest

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of people eating five

protions

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portions

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fruits

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and

vegetables

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, with the

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rising from 20% to 35% from 2001 to 2006, followed by a gradual descent to 30% in 2008. Fewest percentages of children obtained a healthy diet among the other groups over the

8 year

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period, with only around 12% of the group

ate

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eating

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sufficient

fruits

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and

vegetables

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regularly between 2001 and 2003,

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almost

half the

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of the group "women". After 2003, the

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for

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Children's increased and terminated at around 23%.

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porportion

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proportion

of men having a diet of five

fruits

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and

vegetables

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daily demonstrated a gentle growth, from around 17% in 2001 to 25% in 2008, after reaching one-five in 2004.