The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.

The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.
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While
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the line graph illustrates how the
percentage
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of
unemployment
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in 3
groups
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of people in Australia from 1993 to 2003 changes, the pie chart gives a description of the Australian workforce in 2003. On the whole, it can be seen that
unemployment
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in general has gradually been alleviated in Australia over the said decade.
Moreover
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it is clear that
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native Australians account for the largest proportion of the Australian labour force. Regarding the line graph, in 1993, the
unemployment
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rate in all three
groups
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, NESC, Australia and
ESC
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were all at their highest, with the greatest extent belonging to the NESC at 7%.
However
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, from 1993 to 1998, the
percentage
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of jobless NESC fell drastically to below 4%
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and maintained that level until 2003.
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, those of native Australians and
ESC
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in the following decade from 1993 both halved to under 2%. As to the pie chart, it can be seen that the Australian workforce was constituted mostly of native Australians in 2003, with its
percentage
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at 76%, far higher than those of the two other
groups
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. The
percentage
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of workforce contribution for the
ESC
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on the other hand
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, is the lowest, at only 10%, yet, on the bright side, the
ESC
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is
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of lowest
unemployment
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percentage
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among all
groups
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, at approximately 1% in 2003
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, unemployment, groups, esc with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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