The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
The data illustrates the number of
hours
worked per Use synonyms
week
and the annual salaries for four different Use synonyms
professions
.
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Overall
, nurses Linking Words
work
significantly more Use synonyms
hours
than the other Use synonyms
professions
, Use synonyms
while
teachers Linking Words
work
the least and earn the smallest income. Among the four Use synonyms
professions
, fire service employees earn the highest Use synonyms
salary
.
Nurses Use synonyms
work
around 55 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
week
, which is approximately 20 Use synonyms
hours
more than other Use synonyms
professions
. Fire service employees Use synonyms
work
around 39 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
week
, and police officers Use synonyms
work
35 Use synonyms
hours
. Teachers, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, Linking Words
work
the least, with 30 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
week
.
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However
, the annual salaries do not directly reflect the Linking Words
hours
worked. Nurses, despite working the longest Use synonyms
hours
, earn the second-lowest income at $37,450 per year. Teachers, who Use synonyms
work
the fewest Use synonyms
hours
, earn the smallest Use synonyms
salary
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, fire service employees, who Linking Words
work
fewer Use synonyms
hours
, earn the highest Use synonyms
salary
at $52,050 annually, indicating that Use synonyms
salary
is influenced by factors beyond just Use synonyms
hours
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, professions, work, salary with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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