The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
The data illustrates the number of
hours
worked per week
and the annual salaries for four different professions
.
Overall
, nurses work
significantly more hours
than the other professions
, while
teachers work
the least and earn the smallest income. Among the four professions
, fire service employees earn the highest salary
.
Nurses work
around 55 hours
per week
, which is approximately 20 hours
more than other professions
. Fire service employees work
around 39 hours
per week
, and police officers work
35 hours
. Teachers, on the other hand
, work
the least, with 30 hours
per week
.
However
, the annual salaries do not directly reflect the hours
worked. Nurses, despite working the longest hours
, earn the second-lowest income at $37,450 per year. Teachers, who work
the fewest hours
, earn the smallest salary
. In contrast
, fire service employees, who work
fewer hours
, earn the highest salary
at $52,050 annually, indicating that salary
is influenced by factors beyond just hours
worked.Submitted by evijavidemane on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, professions, work, salary with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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