The given line graph compares the proportion of domestic waste recycling in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the recycling rates in the UK and Germany increased over the period while it actually decreased in France
The previous graph illustrates the comparison made between the amount of recycled rubbish produced in three different countries
England
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France
and Germany from 2005 to 2015.
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Overall
, in 2005, it can be clearly seen that Linking Words
France
produced the highest portion of domestic waste, followed by Use synonyms
England
and Germany. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
at the end
of the period, the proportion of waste made by Linking Words
France
was the lowest, exhibiting Use synonyms
England
the highest.
On one hand, Use synonyms
although
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France
showcased the biggest amount of waste with 50% in 2005, it recorded a significant decrease until the year 2013, showing its lowest peak in 2013. After that period of time, in 2015 it slightly rose, Use synonyms
nevertheless
, it showed the lowest figure Linking Words
with
40%.
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On the other hand
, in 2005, Linking Words
England
was the second highest figure with approximately 37%, Use synonyms
however
, it depicted a considerable increase showing its highest surge with just over 60% in 2015. Linking Words
In addition
, even though Germany got the lowest position in 2005, it revealed dramatic growth, showing its second-highest peak in 2013 Linking Words
with
around 50% and its highest peak in 2015 Change preposition
at
with
just above 55%.Change preposition
at
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