The given line graph compares the proportion of domestic waste recycling in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the recycling rates in the UK and Germany increased over the period while it actually decreased in France

The given line graph compares the proportion of domestic waste recycling in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the recycling rates in the UK and Germany increased over the period while it actually decreased in France
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The following graph depicts the proportion of domestic
waste
recyled
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recycled
in the
UK
,
France
and
Germany
through the years 2005
till
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to
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2015.
It is clear that
at the end
of
2015
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2015,
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the
UK
had the most
amount
of
waste
recyled
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recycled
followed by
Germany
and
France
respectively. In 2015,
France
had the most
amount
of
waste
recycled at 50% followed by the
UK
at 35% and
lastly
by
Germany
at 20%.
While
Germany
and the
UK
showed steady growth till 2007,
France
showed a decline in the
amount
of
waste
recycled.
During
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From
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2007
till
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to
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2009, the
UK
showed no increase or decrease in the
amount
of
waste
recycled
while
France
still declined. Out of the three countries mentioned,
France
showed a decline in the
amount
until 2013
where
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when
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it showed a significant inclination towards the
amount
of
waste
recycled. In the end, the
UK
and
Germany
increased by 25 and 35 percentage points respectively
whereas
France
decreased by 10 percentage points.
To conclude
, all
the
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apply
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three countries have started to increase the
amounts
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amount
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of
waste
recycled in 2015.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, uk, france, germany, amount with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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