The given line graph compares the proportion of domestic waste recycling in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the recycling rates in the UK and Germany increased over the period while it actually decreased in France
The following graph depicts the proportion of domestic
waste
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recyled
in the Correct your spelling
recycled
UK
, Use synonyms
France
and Use synonyms
Germany
through the years 2005 Use synonyms
till
2015. Change preposition
to
It is clear that
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2015,
UK
had the most Use synonyms
amount
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waste
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recyled
followed by Correct your spelling
recycled
Germany
and Use synonyms
France
respectively.
In 2015, Use synonyms
France
had the most Use synonyms
amount
of Use synonyms
waste
recycled at 50% followed by the Use synonyms
UK
at 35% and Use synonyms
lastly
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Germany
at 20%. Use synonyms
While
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Germany
and the Use synonyms
UK
showed steady growth till 2007, Use synonyms
France
showed a decline in the Use synonyms
amount
of Use synonyms
waste
recycled. Use synonyms
During
2007 Change preposition
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till
2009, the Change preposition
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UK
showed no increase or decrease in the Use synonyms
amount
of Use synonyms
waste
recycled Use synonyms
while
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France
still declined. Out of the three countries mentioned, Use synonyms
France
showed a decline in the Use synonyms
amount
until 2013 Use synonyms
where
it showed a significant inclination towards the Correct word choice
when
amount
of Use synonyms
waste
recycled. In the end, the Use synonyms
UK
and Use synonyms
Germany
increased by 25 and 35 percentage points respectively Use synonyms
whereas
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France
decreased by 10 percentage points.
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To conclude
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three countries have started to increase the Correct article usage
apply
amounts
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amount
waste
recycled in 2015.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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