The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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calorie

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intake

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due to

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a variety of food in the United States over a period of time. It is evident that the

number of

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calorie

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intake

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has increased

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the years.

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, in the year 1970, the most

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of

calories

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consumed

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through Meat, eggs and Nuts contributing 465

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to the total

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of 2165

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the least

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of

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were taken through fruits. Following that were

grains

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which contributed 430

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to the total

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. Added Sugar and fat

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had a major contribution to the total

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. In 1990,

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amount

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of

calories

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consumed

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575 by

grains

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out of the total 2405

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.

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grains

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showed a significant increase in the

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intake

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, the

calorie

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intake

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of meat

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decreased in 1990. Other major contributors to the total

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of

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ingested were added sugar and fat which were increased by 45 and 50

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from 1970.

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, in 2010, The most

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ingested were from added fats which showed a sudden increase when compared to 1990. Following added fats were

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which contributed to 625

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out of the total 2665.

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the

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of

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ingested by fruits remained the same as they were in 1990, the

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consumed through vegetables were decreased by 5

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.

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, the number of

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have

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increased each year starting from 2165 in 1970 and ending

2665

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at 2665

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in 2010

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the

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amount

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of

calories

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in added sugars and fats

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also

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shown a significant increase.