The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The chart illustrates the amount of money from exporting petroleum
products
, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural products
, textiles
in 2015 and 2016, Correct word choice
and textiles
as well as
the table compares rates
changes for each category. Units are measured in Change the noun form
rate
billions
Change preposition
of dollar
dollar
and percentages. Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
Overall
, it is evident that the number of sales for gems and jewellry
decreased throughout the period, Correct your spelling
jewellery
while
others increased.
In terms of the highest product sold, petroleum products
stood at $60 billions
in 2015 and ended at $62 Change to singular
billion
billions
in 2016. Change to singular
billion
This
number was followed by engineered goods that sold around $55 billions
Change to singular
billion
,
and rose moderately by 8.5%Remove the comma
apply
in
. Meanwhile, gems and Change preposition
apply
jewellry
which started at $43 Correct your spelling
jewellery
billions
witnessed a moderate decline at $40 Fix the agreement mistake
billion
billions
.
Regarding the remaining country exports, agricultural Change to singular
billion
products
had $31 billions
sales in 2015, rose Fix the agreement mistake
billion
sligthly
by 0.81%. Correct your spelling
slightly
Finally
, as the smallest export products
, textiles began at $25 Fix the agreement mistake
product
billions
. Change to singular
billion
Whereas
, the percentages of this
product experienced a significant growth by 15.24% over the period.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
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