The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented charts in combination illustrate the percentages of workers in three different sectors which are agriculture, industry and services in four different countries and their differences in 1980 and 2010.
A glance at the graphs reveals that the
sector
which sees the most workers employed is the industry in Germany, USA
and Japan in both 1980 and 2010, Correct article usage
the USA
on the contrary
China
presents a higher number of employees in agriculture.
As it
is observed in the graphs, the percentages of workers in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
sector
of industry increased roughly by 20% in Germany and USA
and by 30% in Japan from 1980 to 2010. Correct article usage
the USA
However
, the percentage stood exactly at 40% in China
. On the other hand
, in China
it has Add a comma
China,
been
registered a decrease because even if it remains constant that the Unnecessary verb
apply
sector
with more employment is the
agriculture it has undergone a decline from 70% to 50%. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, in China
also
the sector
of service drop
from 50% to 20%.Wrong verb form
dropped
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