Food travels thousands of miles from producers to customers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by farmers. Advantages and disadvantages.
Losgistic
of Correct your spelling
Logistic
Logistics
food
normally takes up more than 50% of the food
cost as food
travels a long way from producers to customers if it is imported. Therefore
, some people sugggested
that it would benefit the Correct your spelling
suggested
environment
and economy if people only eat local food
products
by
local farmers.
On the positive aspect, eating local Change preposition
from
food
can help raise the income of local farmers and therefore
, benefits the total national economy based on some empirical evidence based
research done by scholars. The scholars Add a hyphen
evidence-based
also
suggested that our environment
is actually a mirco ecosystem and what comes from the soil will go back to the soil eventually. Thus
, eating local products
conserve
the local Correct subject-verb agreement
conserves
environment
in theory while
consuming imported food
products
would produce tons of carbon
footprints and damage our earth
ecosystem.
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earth's
On the other hand
, opponents suggested that despite producing carbon
footprints, consuming imported products
promote
global trade business and Correct subject-verb agreement
promotes
help
improve international trading Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
relationship
. Trading has been seen as a type of cultural exchange since Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
the
ancient Correct article usage
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time
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Silk
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road
is a very typical representation of it. At the same time, they provided some empirical evidence that consuming Capitalize word
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food
from different attitudes allows the body to intake more various kinds of nutrients and therefore
, it
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apply
help
to reduce certain kinds of serious diseases Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
such
as heart diseases and cancers. For examples
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with
high
attitude helps to lower blood pressure and eventually Correct article usage
a high
lower
the chance of heart disease in Correct subject-verb agreement
lowers
human
.
In conclusion, some nutrients can only be found in certain types of Fix the agreement mistake
humans
food
and those food
can only be imported. If we wish to balance body health, economy and Fix the agreement mistake
foods
environment
, importation
of Correct article usage
the importation
food
should not be banned completely but instead
, we can maintain it at a certain level by
taxation and laws. Regarding Change preposition
through
environment
and Correct article usage
the environment
carbon
footprint, there are some new electrical transportation methods which can greatly reduce carbon
emission
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emissions
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also
lowers the cost of logistics at the same time.Submitted by h_within2004 on
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task achievement
The essay broadly addresses the task prompt and covers both advantages and disadvantages of eating local food. However, try to provide clearer and more detailed examples to support your points.
coherence cohesion
While the essay has a logical structure, some sentences could be organized more logically to enhance cohesion. For instance, you could present contrasting points in closer proximity for clearer comparison.
coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which provides a good structure for the reader.
task achievement
The essay presents a balanced view, addressing both the environmental/economic benefits of eating local food as well as the cultural and health benefits of imported food. This shows a thorough understanding of the topic.
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