Nowadays good good governance and healthy politics have become a fabled phenomenon and people, particularly the youth, have lost their trust and interest in politics and public affairs. Whom do you blame for this attitudinal change? How do you think people's trust in politics and interest in public affairs can be restored?
In the recent era, the young generation
have
lost their faith in Change the verb form
has
politics
and public affairs due to
the diminishing of fair governance and healthy politics
. This
essay will discuss who is to blame for this
kind of change and what steps should be taken to restore the belief of general
public in Correct article usage
the general
politics
and public interests.
To begin
with, the political atmosphere of modern
world consists of a government run by Add an article
the modern
the
greedy and corrupt politicians. Correct article usage
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Therefore
, it is hard to believe if
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that
who
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that
for
public affairs and interests will Change preposition
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for the benefit for
their fellow citizens because Change preposition
of
this
does not reflect on their actions. Majority
of the political groups Correct article usage
The majority
work
hard to win the elections once their term comes to an end. No effective steps are taken to eradicate every problems
and the general public is left with incomplete and fake promises. Change to a singular noun
problem
Due to
these factors
the youth tends to lose their faith when it comes to governance and Add a comma
factors,
politics
. For councils in Asian states which consisted of political leaders who were charged for corruption, published a survey regarding the voting results, where around 87% of the youth did not casted
their vote during elections.
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cast
However
, despite these challenges
the government should step in with some strict laws to impose on politicians who are involved in malpractices and dirty Add a comma
challenges,
politics
. Strengthening the mainstream media
can also
be effective upto
a certain extent. In the past it has been seen that political parties do not involve themselves in corruption and malpractices if their performance is Correct your spelling
up to
fact checked
with their prior promises and Add a hyphen
fact-checked
media
houses provide Add an article
an update
update
with any Fix the agreement mistake
updates
parsiality
to the general public. A prime example of Correct your spelling
partiality
this
scenario can considered from a study published by the University of Arizona, stating that leader
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leaders
a
countries who have a strong mainstream Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
media
work
more efficiently compared to those nations who lack the
number of strong Correct article usage
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media
houses.
In conclusion, the trust of youth can be regained in public affair
if more qualified and dedicated leaders take charge of the government, ma Fix the agreement mistake
affairs
additionally
the mainstream media
can also
play an important role to criticize
the policies and Change preposition
in criticizing
work
of the political groups.Submitted by patelvaibhav1463 on
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