The line graph below describes production of different fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below describes production of different fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2001.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied line graph indicates how much various
fuels
such
as petroleum,natural
gas
and coal were
prduced
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produced
in the United
kingdom
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Kingdom
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over a twenty-year period. A glance at the graph reveals that the three different
fuels
experienced substantial changes in the
UK
.
Moreover
,petroleum had
an
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a
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slight downward trend.Whilst,coal and natural
gas
fluctuated over the period. In 1981,just over 120
million
tonnes
coal
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of coal
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was produced in the
UK
.(Which was the highest
amount
of prepared
fuels
over the whole year).For the next
years
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years,
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the
amount
of provided coal fluctuated and
at the end
of
trend
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the trend
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hit the bottom at nearly 40
million
tonnes
in the
UK
in 2000.(Which was the lowest proportion of produced
fuels
over the period).
In addition
,the proportion of manufactured natural
gas
was approximately 70
million
tonnes
in 1981.
Then
,
this
amount
increased gradually and reached just around 118 in the United Kingdom in 1990.After that,the
amount
of production of natural
gas
decreased modestly until 2001.Surprisingly,In 1981,roughly 88
million
tonnes
petroleum
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of petroleum
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was produced in the
UK
,and
then
it declined slowly from 1982 to 2001.
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