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The line graph below describes production of different fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below describes production of different fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied line graph indicates how much various
fuels
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such
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 as petroleum,natural
gas
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 and coal were
prduced
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produced
 in the United
kingdom
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Kingdom
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 over a twenty-year period. A glance at the graph reveals that the three different
fuels
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 experienced substantial changes in the
UK
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.
Moreover
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,petroleum had
an
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 slight downward trend.Whilst,coal and natural
gas
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 fluctuated over the period. In 1981,just over 120
million
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tonnes
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coal
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of coal
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 was produced in the
UK
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.(Which was the highest
amount
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 of prepared
fuels
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 over the whole year).For the next
years
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years,
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 the
amount
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 of provided coal fluctuated and
at the end
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 of
trend
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the trend
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 hit the bottom at nearly 40
million
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tonnes
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 in the
UK
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 in 2000.(Which was the lowest proportion of produced
fuels
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 over the period).
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,the proportion of manufactured natural
gas
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 was approximately 70
million
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tonnes
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 in 1981.
Then
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,
this
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amount
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 increased gradually and reached just around 118 in the United Kingdom in 1990.After that,the
amount
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 of production of natural
gas
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 decreased modestly until 2001.Surprisingly,In 1981,roughly 88
million
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tonnes
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petroleum
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of petroleum
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 was produced in the
UK
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,and
then
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 it declined slowly from 1982 to 2001.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuels, gas, uk, million, tonnes, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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