The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart presents the ratio of
exports
of Australian goods with 4 major countries from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
, Australia had the highest percentage of exports
with China. They had the lowest business with India.However
, with US did a good amount of exports
in the initial years but with the passage of time, the percentage decreased.
In 1990 the percentage of exported products with China was below 5% and it remained the same till 2000. However
, in 2001 there was a rapid growth in exports
and till 2012 the exports
were around 30% which was the highest amount of exports
compared to other countries.
Furthermore
, in the initial years
Australia had a little more than 25% of Add a comma
years,
exports
with Japan but it decreased with the timeline.Moreover
, the exports
with India did not grow much and remained below 10% and they did not have the highest ratio of exports
with India.Submitted by mifzalrizwan2 on
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