The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960, 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the number of individuals working in
the
several sectors in two different cities between 1960 and 2010.
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Overall
, it can be seen that in 1960, the largest percentage of workers in towns A and B worked in the manufacturing sectors. While
for Town A, it changed to services in the second year shown.
City A had slightly below from
half of the employers employed in manufacturing followed by sales and services by 1960. Change preposition
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This
condition changed in 2010, where
services rose significantly and became the widest number of Correct word choice
when
the
employers with Correct article usage
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total
amount of workers was 64%.
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the total
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On the other hand
, over 50 years, city B had the vast majority of citizens worked
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working
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manufacturing. For service areas, the occupation increased dramatically from only one ten in 1960 to a quarter in 2010. Correct article usage
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In addition
, 22% of people in this
city became sales which was just over than in the previous year shown.Submitted by hikmanurdin04 on
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