The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960, 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the distribution of employment across three sectors—manufacturing,
sales
, and services
—in towns A and B for the years 1960 and 2010.
In 1960, Town A had a dominant manufacturing sector, employing 41% of the workforce. Sales
were also
significant, comprising 29%, while
services
accounted for 30%. By 2010, there was a notable shift in Town A, with services
becoming the leading sector at 64%. Manufacturing saw a dramatic decrease to 20%, and sales
remained relatively stable at 16%.
Similarly
, Town B experienced substantial changes. In 1960, manufacturing was overwhelmingly dominant, with 70% of workers, while
sales
and services
were much smaller at 20% and 10%, respectively. By 2010, services
had grown to 31%, and sales
increased to 21%,
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while
manufacturing significantly declined to 48%.
Overall
, both towns transitioned from being heavily reliant on manufacturing to having a more balanced economy, with a pronounced growth in the service sector over the 50-year period.Submitted by eparfenenkov on
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