You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organization. In your letter – express your interest – ask for details of the work that needs to be done – let them know when you are available.
I hope you are doing well . I am writing
this
letter to express my keen interest in volunteering work with local children . Volunteering has always been an important aspect of my life, as i
believe in giving back to Change the capitalization
I
community
and making positive differences in the lives of children.
I would like to know about the nature of the work that needs to be done. Add an article
the community
Specially
, I am Replace the word
Especially
intersted
Correct your spelling
interested
to know
about the types of Change preposition
in knowing
activites
. which age group of children are there? Is there any specific skill or education required for Correct your spelling
activities
this
volunteer work ? I am artist
by profession .
I am available to volunteer in the evening and on Add an article
an artist
weekend
, please let me know if these times Fix the agreement mistake
weekends
allign
Correct your spelling
align
your
Change preposition
with your
organization
needs. Feel free to tell me the available time so I can manage by myself .
I eagerly look forward to hearing from you.
yours faithfully,
x.y.zChange noun form
organization's
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task achievement
Your letter accomplishes the task effectively by addressing all points mentioned in the prompt. However, you might want to provide a bit more specific detail regarding your availability or your related skills to give a more thorough response.
coherence cohesion
Try to ensure that all your sentences are complete and connected. For instance, 'Specially, I am intersted to know about the types of activites. which age group of children are there?' can be connected better.
task achievement
Your interest and intentions are clearly communicated, and the letter is very polite and appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and well-executed.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph has a distinct focus, which helps in clearly conveying your message.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.