Your manager is going ot leave your company next month. You and a colleague want to give your manager a leaving present. Write a letter ot this colleague. In your letter say how you feel about your manager leaving describe a possible present for your manager suggest arrangements for buying the present
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
email finds you well. I am writing this
message in order to plan a simple present for our manger
before he leaves Correct your spelling
manager
working
in our company.
To be honest, I feel very sad about his Replace the word
work
desicion
. He is Correct your spelling
decision
such
a great manger
, who was helping us Correct your spelling
manager
became
a better worker each day. I almost consider him as one of my friends. Change the form of the verb
become
Therefore
, for sure we will miss him so much.
For the present, I suggests
buying him a new laptop for his new job. He said to me yesterday that his laptop is no longer working, and that's why I think it would be a great Change the verb form
suggest
supreise
.
Correct your spelling
surprise
In addition
to that, my brother who is working
in an Wrong verb form
works
electronic
store, knows a lot about different Replace the word
electronics
type
of devices, and I think he could advise us in buying the gift. Fix the agreement mistake
types
Therefore
, I will contact with
him for help. And we will make Change preposition
apply
an
arrangements for the present.
If you need any details please contact me by email.
Kind regards,
Nouf Mut,Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
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task achievement
Include specific examples of your manager's positive impact to provide more context.
coherence cohesion
Avoid minor spelling mistakes like 'desicion' instead of 'decision'.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and collaborative, which is suitable for the context.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear introduction, body, and closing, which helps in logical structuring.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite