The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagrams represent the comparison between the
ratio
of old
men
and
women
doing jobs in four countries in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
,
Japan
had the highest
ratio
of old
men
and
women
in employment as compared to other countries. Belgium had the lowest
ratio
of aged
men
doing the job but with the passage of time, it increased.
Moreover
, there was a slight difference in the percentage between both years of working
women
in Australia. To commence with, regarding the percentage of old
men
, In 1970
Japan
had the highest
ratio
of 84 per
cent
of
men
were in employment and in 2000
Japan
had a
ratio
of 76 per
cent
. In 1970 Belgium had a
ratio
of 79 per
cent
of old working
men
but in 2000 the
ratio
of working
men
decreased dramatically.
On the other hand
,
Japan
had nearly the same
ratio
of working old
women
in both years, which was the highest as compared to other countries.Belgium had the lowest
ratio
of 8 per
cent
of working-aged
women
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment rate
  • Percentage
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Gender disparity
  • Trend
  • Decline
  • Improvement
  • Variation
  • Noteworthy
  • Aligned
  • Comparative analysis
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