The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagrams represent the comparison between the
ratio
of old men
and women
doing jobs in four countries in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, Japan
had the highest ratio
of old men
and women
in employment as compared to other countries. Belgium had the lowest ratio
of aged men
doing the job but with the passage of time, it increased. Moreover
, there was a slight difference in the percentage between both years of working women
in Australia.
To commence with, regarding the percentage of old men
, In 1970 Japan
had the highest ratio
of 84 per cent
of men
were in employment and in 2000 Japan
had a ratio
of 76 per cent
. In 1970 Belgium had a ratio
of 79 per cent
of old working men
but in 2000 the ratio
of working men
decreased dramatically.
On the other hand
, Japan
had nearly the same ratio
of working old women
in both years, which was the highest as compared to other countries.Belgium had the lowest ratio
of 8 per cent
of working-aged women
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