The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagrams represent the comparison between the
ratio
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of old
men
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and
women
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doing jobs in four countries in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
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,
Japan
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had the highest
ratio
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of old
men
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and
women
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in employment as compared to other countries. Belgium had the lowest
ratio
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of aged
men
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doing the job but with the passage of time, it increased.
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, there was a slight difference in the percentage between both years of working
women
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in Australia. To commence with, regarding the percentage of old
men
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, In 1970
Japan
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had the highest
ratio
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of 84 per
cent
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of
men
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were in employment and in 2000
Japan
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had a
ratio
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of 76 per
cent
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. In 1970 Belgium had a
ratio
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of 79 per
cent
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of old working
men
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but in 2000 the
ratio
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of working
men
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decreased dramatically.
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,
Japan
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had nearly the same
ratio
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of working old
women
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in both years, which was the highest as compared to other countries.Belgium had the lowest
ratio
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of 8 per
cent
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of working-aged
women
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ratio, men, women, japan, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 9 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment rate
  • Percentage
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Gender disparity
  • Trend
  • Decline
  • Improvement
  • Variation
  • Noteworthy
  • Aligned
  • Comparative analysis
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