The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
In the
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we can see the three main fuels used in the UK between 1981 and 2000 measured in energy Add a comma
graph,
units
. In 1981 the most Use synonyms
ammount
of Correct your spelling
amount
petroleum
fuel Use synonyms
is
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was
moset
used at around 90 energy Correct your spelling
most
units
, it is closely followed by coal at 80 Use synonyms
units
, white natural gas usage is half of that, ar 40 Use synonyms
units
.
In the years to follow we can see a rapid rising Use synonyms
of
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in
petroleum
usage reaching its peak of 140 Use synonyms
points
in 1984, Use synonyms
while
coal Linking Words
achives
close to an Correct your spelling
archives
achieves
all time
low in the same year at around 38 energy Add a hyphen
all-time
units
finding its way back up to around 60 Use synonyms
points
in 1986. Another significant change is the drastic drop Use synonyms
of
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in
petroleum
production in 1990 reaching 100 Use synonyms
points
, around the same time natural gas Use synonyms
starts
to steadily Wrong verb form
started
raise
until the year 2000 reaching 100 Correct your spelling
rise
points
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petroleum
being at an Use synonyms
all time
high and coal slowly declining to around 30 Add a hyphen
all-time
points
.Use synonyms
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