the chart below information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 208. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fetures, and make comparison where relavant.
The given bar
char
Correct your spelling
chart
illustrate
data about the percentage distribution of weekly revenue to 8 different categories in families between 1968 and 2018.
Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrates
Overall
, more money was initially
spent on food than any other groups, but it was outnumbered by expenses on leisure. Additionally
, while
families started to spend more on housing, transport and leisure, others witnessed downward
trend.
Looking at the details, spending on food comprised 35%, after which it decreased by half in 2018. In the first year, fuel and power formed approximately 6%, and Correct article usage
a downward
then
it decreased to a
slightly less than 5% in 2018. A similar pattern can be seen in Correct article usage
apply
clothing
and personal goods category, Correct article usage
the clothing
they
accounted for about 10% and 8%; Correct pronoun usage
which
however
, the percentage of spendings
experienced Fix the agreement mistake
spending
Correct article usage
a decrease
decrease
to nearly 5% and 4%. Change the verb form
decreases
Also
, the expense of family earnings on household goods remained unchanged at roughly 7%. The index for housing was as high as for clothing, before increasing almost by 10%. Moreover
, the slight
similar upward trend saw transport and leisure categories, they contributed roughly 8%, they went up reaching 15% and 23% respectively.Change the word
slightly
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