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The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008
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The chart represents the statistics
of
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on
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consumption
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the consumption
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 of fruits and
vegettables
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vegetables
 by
women
,
men
 and
children
in
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from
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the year
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year
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years
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 2001 to 2008. It is evident that
men
 consumed
maximum
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a maximum
the maximum
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 number of
portion
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portions
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 in 2006 ,
women
 consumed
maximum
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the maximum
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 in 2008 and
children
 in 2007.
Also
, in the category of
men
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men,
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 there is
slight
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a slight
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 increase every
year
 from 2001 to 2007.
However
, there is
minor
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a minor
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 dip in 2008 by 2%.
Additionally
,
women
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women's
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 and
children
's
percentage
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percentages
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also
 increased moderately every
year
 and
sink
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a sink
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is
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was
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 seen in the
year
 2008 approximately about 2-3% in both of them. From 2001 to 2003, the portion consumed by
children
reamined
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remained
same
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the same
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.
Overall
, the colossal amount is consumed by
women
 in all the years compared to
men
 and
children
.
Men
 are
on
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in
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 second number in eating vegetables and fruits and
children
remains
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remain
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 the
last
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men, children, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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