The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008
The chart represents the statistics
of
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on
consumption
of fruits and Correct article usage
the consumption
vegettables
by Correct your spelling
vegetables
women
, men
and children
in
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from
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the year
year
2001 to 2008.
It is evident that Fix the agreement mistake
years
men
consumed maximum
number of Change the article
a maximum
the maximum
portion
in 2006 ,Fix the agreement mistake
portions
women
consumed maximum
in 2008 and Correct article usage
the maximum
children
in 2007. Also
, in the category of men
there is Add a comma
men,
slight
increase every Correct article usage
a slight
year
from 2001 to 2007. However
, there is minor
dip in 2008 by 2%.
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a minor
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, women
and Change noun form
women's
children
's percentage
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percentages
also
increased moderately every year
and sink
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a sink
is
seen in the Wrong verb form
was
year
2008 approximately about 2-3% in both of them. From 2001 to 2003, the portion consumed by children
reamined
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remained
same
.
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the same
Overall
, the colossal amount is consumed by women
in all the years compared to men
and children
. Men
are on
second number in eating vegetables and fruits and Change preposition
in
children
remains
the Wrong verb form
remain
last
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