The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008

The chart represents the statistics

of

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consumption

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the consumption

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of fruits and

vegettables

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vegetables

by

women

,

men

and

children

in

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from

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the year

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year

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years

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2001 to 2008. It is evident that

men

consumed

maximum

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a maximum

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number of

portion

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portions

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in 2006 ,

women

consumed

maximum

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the maximum

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in 2008 and

children

in 2007.

Also

, in the category of

men

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men,

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there is

slight

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a slight

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increase every

year

from 2001 to 2007.

However

, there is

minor

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a minor

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dip in 2008 by 2%.

Additionally

,

women

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women's

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and

children

's

percentage

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percentages

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also

increased moderately every

year

and

sink

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is

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was

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seen in the

year

2008 approximately about 2-3% in both of them. From 2001 to 2003, the portion consumed by

children

reamined

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remained

same

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the same

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.

Overall

, the colossal amount is consumed by

women

in all the years compared to

men

and

children

.

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are

on

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in

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second number in eating vegetables and fruits and

children

remains

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remain

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the

last

.