The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates global
water
consumption
across three sectors—agriculture, industrial, and domestic—over the period from 1900 to 2000. The table provides specific data on
water
usage per person in
Brazil
and the Democratic Republic of Congo (DRC) as of 2000.
Overall
,
while
water
consumption
increased in all sectors, agriculture consistently had the highest usage worldwide.
Additionally
,
water
consumption
per capita in
Brazil
was significantly higher than in the DRC, primarily
due to
Brazil
's larger population and extensive irrigated land. In 1900, agricultural
water
use was approximately 500 Km³,
while
industrial and domestic
consumption
was negligible, each at less than 1,000 Km³. Between 1900 and 1950, there was a gradual increase in
water
usage across all sectors.
However
, from 1950 onwards,
water
consumption
rose sharply, particularly in agriculture, which reached around 3,000 Km³ by the year 2000, remaining the largest consumer throughout the century. Turning to the table,
Brazil
, with a population of 176 million and 26,500 Km² of irrigated land, had a per capita
water
consumption
of 359 m³ in 2000.
In contrast
, the DRC, with a population of only 5.2 million and 100 Km² of irrigated land, had a significantly lower per capita
water
consumption
of just 8 m³.
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