You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
serves
information about the percentage of women who Verb problem
provides
go
to higher education in five Wrong verb form
went
various
countries between Correct word choice
apply
years
1980 and 2015. Correct article usage
the years
Overall
, in each country
, the total amount of women going into
university was Change preposition
to
increase
. But, only Wrong verb form
increased
Australia
that the Change preposition
in Australia
percentation
was Correct your spelling
presentation
same
Correct article usage
the same
in
different times.
First of all, the United Kingdom in 1985 had Change preposition
at
percentage
at 35 per Correct article usage
a percentage
cent
. Then
, significantly increased until
55 per Change preposition
to
cent
in 2015. Move to another
state, the United States of America Verb problem
Another
also
have a
same phenomenon. Correct article usage
the
Initially
, in 1985 the percentage just
around 38 per Add a missing verb
was just
cent
. A little bit higher than the UK. In 2015, sharply up by 20 per cent
which was 58 per cent
.
In South Korea itself, the country
begin
with 15 per Wrong verb form
began
cent
in 1985. Then
, succesfully
upwards to 30 per Correct your spelling
successfully
cent
. Next,
in France, the difference is not too far. In 1985, the state started with a great number, 50 per cent
. Subsequently
, in 2015 the country
had only 53 per cent
. The last
country
, Australia has same
Change the article
the same
percentation
which was stagnant at 58 per Correct your spelling
percentage
cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words country, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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