A growing number of people rely on restaurants and convenience food (frozen food and packaged meals) rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way?

#people #restaurants #convenience #food #meals

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

An increasing number of

people

Use synonyms

depend on

restaurants

Use synonyms

and fast

food

Use synonyms

like frozen

food

Use synonyms

and packaged

meals

Use synonyms

rather than

cook

Wrong verb form

cooking

show examples

their

meals

Use synonyms

by themselves.

This

Linking Words

case has two sides, the advantages and the disadvantages. The advantage is

people

Use synonyms

who have

restaurants

Use synonyms

can

get

Verb problem

apply

show examples

profit from

this

Linking Words

kind of business and the drawback is consumers potentially eat non-healthy

foods

Use synonyms

. I will elaborate

Change preposition

on it

show examples

below.

Firstly

Linking Words

, the owner of the

restaurant

Use synonyms

can gain revenue from

this

Linking Words

business.

This

Linking Words

also

Linking Words

can

give

Verb problem

apply

show examples

benefits

Correct subject-verb agreement

benefit

show examples

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

workers because they can be

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

servant

Fix the agreement mistake

servants

show examples

at the

restaurant

Use synonyms

For example

Linking Words

, near my house, there is a

restaurant

Use synonyms

that serves convenience

food

Use synonyms

and

Linking Words

due to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

restaurants

Use synonyms

near

from

Change preposition

apply

show examples

undergraduate student's

apartment

Fix the agreement mistake

apartments

show examples

who can not cook, they often buy

food

Use synonyms

from there.

This

Linking Words

restaurant

Use synonyms

is more and more thriving, so the owner

hire

Change the verb form

hires

show examples

many workers to work for it.

In other words

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

type of business can spread many advantages for many

people

Use synonyms

such

Linking Words

as the owner, workers, and students.

Then

Linking Words

, the flaw of

this

Linking Words

kind of

food

Use synonyms

people

Use synonyms

possible to not eat healthy

meals

Use synonyms

. The reason is because they do not know the nutrition of the

foods

Use synonyms

For instance

Linking Words

, my friend got stomach ache after she consumed

meals

Use synonyms

from a

restaurant

Use synonyms

. After that, she went to a hospital. It indicates that not all

restaurants

Use synonyms

consider

about

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

healthy

foods

Use synonyms

for their customers.

To conclude

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

issue has a positive and negative impact. The good news is the

restaurant

Use synonyms

can give benefits to the owners until the customers. But, the bad news is

people

Use synonyms

can get sick easily because they are not consuming healthy

foods

Use synonyms

. I highly

reccommend

Correct your spelling

recommend

for

people

Use synonyms

Add a missing verb

do more

show examples

wisely

everytime

Replace the word

every time

show examples

when they want to buy some

food

Use synonyms

Submitted by wishmeluck on Tue Aug 27 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task achievement

Try to provide a clear and concise thesis statement in your introduction to precisely indicate the main points you will discuss in the essay.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph centers on a single main idea and provides sufficient details and evidence to support it.

task achievement

You have successfully identified both advantages and disadvantages of relying on restaurants and convenience food.

coherence cohesion

The introduction and conclusion sections are clear and appropriately frame the essay.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

284 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

convenience food
processed food
nutritional value
high-calorie
sodium content
dietary needs
budget constraints
culinary skills
health implications
time management
professional chefs
meal preparation
varied cuisine
unhealthy fats

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4.5
band
With the growing population of cities, more and more people live in homes that have little or no outdoor area. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
In the modern era, the population in certain nations is increasing at an incredible rate. Well, due to more occupants, the rate of houses built with no outdoor areas is increasing and a part of the society believes that it is a positive development of the country but remaining to reject the notion. According to my opinion, the latter view seems to be more significant so, the reasons behind this will be explicated in upcoming paragraphs. Thus, will lead to a logical conclusion as well.
6
band
More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Technology)
Nowadays, the majority of people handling electronic devices to read news and gain details instead of using newspapers or paper books. I agree with the idea that the community should use technology more than traditional ways. In the upcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss my point of view in detail.
5.5
band
Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
The given bar chart and line graph present three various groups of employees in Australia and the number of unemployed from those groups between 1993 and 2003. Both contributions are provided in percentage.
7.5
band
Write a letter to the manager of the HR department of a company requesting information about the interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter, * describe the position you applied for * why you think the interview went well * why you need the result of the interview
I am writing this letter to get the information regarding the interview result which I attended last Friday and still waiting for results.
8
band
Your local travel agent recommended a place to visit and you are now having a good time there. Write a letter to your travel agent and tell them the following: what you have been doing; what you hope to do before the end of your holiday; say why you like this place.
I am writing to you as promised in order to share my holiday at the Tori Gate Exposition.

A growing number of people rely on restaurants and convenience food (frozen food and packaged meals) rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

With the growing population of cities, more and more people live in homes that have little or no outdoor area. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Technology)

Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

Write a letter to the manager of the HR department of a company requesting information about the interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter, * describe the position you applied for * why you think the interview went well * why you need the result of the interview

Your local travel agent recommended a place to visit and you are now having a good time there. Write a letter to your travel agent and tell them the following: what you have been doing; what you hope to do before the end of your holiday; say why you like this place.