The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration demonstrates the development plan for a manufacturing site located in
town
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a town
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called Norbiton.
Overall
, the future
enhancment
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enhancement
plan features the addition of many amenities and alterations to the infrastructure of the region. The vision for the developed town introduces new facilities. A medical
center
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is established at the southeast of the roundabout,
whereas
shops are added to the southwest of the same roundabout. The location of some
housings
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housing
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have
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shifted to add a playground in the northeast, near the homes.
Moreover
, towards the east, specifically towards the end of the road, a school is built.
According to
the plan, the infrastructure
also
undergoes
advanement
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advancement
. Two more exits are created for the roundabout, the first leads to more housings,
while
the next connects to the newly
onstructed
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constructed
bridge. The Farmland and the town that are currently
seperated
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separated
by the river will be connected with a
new
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newly
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established bridge leading to more
housings
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housing
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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