The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information and compare where relevant, by selecting and reporting the key features.
The given table illustrates the proportion of people in two
areas
who engaged in four leisure activities which is
reading, animated play, playing and photography for the years 1990 and 2010. Change the verb form
are
Overall
, there are no significant changes, but it is noticeable that in 2010 the number of participants increased in almost every section. Despite the difference of 20 years, there are particular groups that decreased or did not change.
To begin
with, according to
the data in 1990 urban and rural areas
mostly took a
part in a reading activity, which is 61% and 71%, respectively. In second place in popularity and quantity was animated play, the percentage of rural Correct article usage
apply
were
26 and urban 21. Only 18% and 10% of village and city locals participated in animated play, respectively. The lowest percentage from all of the groups is photography, which is 14% of countryside residents and 10% of town people.
Turning to 2010, portions of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
reading
category in city and village Correct article usage
the reading
areas
enhanced
Verb problem
increased
for
17% and 7%, respectively, which in both cases is 78%. Change preposition
by
Category
that took second place by quantity in 1990 has not increased, the percentage of Add an article
The category
A category
agricultural
region is still 26 and municipal area is 14%, which is 7% less than Add an article
the agricultural
in
was before. Correct your spelling
it
in
the proportion of the group that calls an "animated game" has not changed in the city, which is still 10%, and in Change preposition
apply
Correct article usage
the countyside
countyside
Correct your spelling
countryside
area
it has decreased by 4%, which is now 14%. Add a comma
area,
Nevertheless
, the category called "photography" has grown for
10% in both Change preposition
by
areas
, which is 24% and 17% in rural and urban, respectively.Submitted by bellovanina97 on
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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