The diagrams below show stages in the development of simple cooking equipment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The listed diagram depicts the manufacturing process, describing a series of three phases through which a used stone vase is made as merely cooking equipment, consisting of a
clay
shield, metal, ash, etc.
If we take three steps in combination, it is clear that
stage A commences with turning a stone vase into a circled clay
shield mould followed by putting some dry grass in it on step B. In stark contrast to the previous stages, the C phase requires putting many parts of the equipment together such
as the metal form takes on the clay
shield with the door in it to bring the air in along with
taking out the ash.
Another striking part of the process reveals putting the support for the pot on top of the metal shape covered in clay
lining in conjunction with placing a grate inside for charcoal. In addition
, the handle was also
carved from the upper structure.Submitted by kirkagoglesmail on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words clay with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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